Story Management

Creative Writing has something called Scenes, and it helps slow down the story and really describe what is happening.

So I like this tool. YouTube channel Writing With Andrew has a video titled “Inviting your Readers into: Scene and Summary” and “A Starting Guide for Writing Nonfiction.”

Basically in the videos he highlights that scenes fill out the moment that I am trying to capture with sensory details, dialogues and specific interactions.

Alot of the dialogues in CRG are very linear, with yes and now answers.

It is going to take alot of Story Management to gt them better… and back in the train car.